A LITTLE BIT OF WRITING - CPC CHALLENGE

November 15, 2017



 I love writing.  I think about writing more than I can say.  But how often do I really write?  Not much, unfortunately.  

A week or so ago I found out Carol was in need of a few new people to participate in her Cameras and Pens challenge.  I jumped at the opportunity.  She was so sweet to accept me.  So, without further ado, here is my poem.  
I Fell In Love With Her

I’m not sure why I fell in love with her
You never loved me
It wasn’t really love
I thought this was real
I saw her crying
You don’t care about me
She looked at me
So I’ll turn away
And smiled
To hide my tears
She gave me her number
I block your number
I gave her mine
I know you’ll block mine
I said I love you
I did love you
She said it too
And I still do
Then I stopped meaning it
You never meant it, but
I never stood a chance, did I?
That’s the sad part-you did, once
But I never forgot you
I’ll forgive and forget
Did you ever love me?
I’m not sure why I fell in love with you


I apologize for the short post, but hope you enjoyed to poem.  I'd love to hear any constructive criticism you have for me.  And don't forget to check out Carol's blog

Look out for an exciting post on Saturday!

~ Ella Marie

Do you write very often?  What's your favorite thing you've ever written?  Have you checked out the Cameras and Pens Challenge?  Would you like to read more of my writing?  

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18 comments

  1. Aw, that's a sadly sweet, heartbreaking poem!! Thanks for the tears and the heartbreak... *stuffs French Fry in mouth*

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    1. Aww, I'm sorry! But I'm really happy it was touching. *gives you more French Fries because you deserve them*

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  2. I'm not crying. Nope. No crying here. *sobs silently in a corner* Th-this is so beautiful, Ella. Great job. <3

    I relate.

    xx Kenzie

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    1. Ahaha, sorry about that! *gives you ice cream to cheer you up* but honestly, that's the best compliment you can give me. Thank you! <3

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  3. Awww, it's definitely a bittersweet one, but a good one, Ella!!

    Catherine
    catherinesrebellingmuse.blogspot.com

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  4. I love poetry (both writing and reading) and this was really beautiful!

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    1. Me too! Thanks Nabila, you're the sweetest!

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  5. Wow, I'm in awe of the format of your poem! I'm not sure if you intended it to read left column then right column, or back and forth, but I read it both ways and it's incredible. xx

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    1. Eeep, thank you, Jessica! I'm not even sure how the best way to read it is. I wrote it sort of all over the place. Thank you for the comment, love!

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  6. MY HEART IS IN SHREDS. Ahh that's so beautiful!

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    1. I'm sorry let me give you chocolate and virtual hugs to help put it back together! But at the same time, I'm very appreciative <3

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  7. AWWWW OH MY GOSH THAT'S SO SAD I'M GONNA CRY. *sniffs* But hey, you create epically touching poetry! Most poetry makes me roll my eyes or die laughing.

    --Madi

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    1. THANK YOU! I might have kind of cried while writing it... Wow, that's such an amazing complement!

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  8. I was just going to mention what Jessica did. I read the poem left and right then one side and then the other. I loved this read.

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    1. Oh cool! I'm honestly not sure what the best way to read it is. Thank you so much, Vanessa!

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  9. Hey Ella :D That was such a cool sweet poem AHHH I DEFINITELY NEED MORE OF YOUR WRITING <333

    Btw you have such a lovely blog and thanks for following me ^-^

    - Lisa
    thisinkwell.blogspot.com

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    1. Hey Lisa (I love you name <3)! THANK YOU SO MUCH! Aww, thanks! Of course, you and your blog are so beautiful too!

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